Last updated: July 8, 2023
Advice from Tony "Sparx" Palermo
I was asked how to convey multiple
time-transitions in a radio drama. Setting, in all storytelling, is both a place and a time, for example: THE CAVE - 1,000,000 B.C. or LINDSAY'S FROZEN LIVING ROOM - NEXT WEEK or NICOLO'S TUMMY - TWO HOURS AFTER EATING A GALLON OF ICE CREAM Setting the scene in any of the above will require triggering the imagination of the listener. Always remember that YOU, as an audio writer are a hypnotist! Whatever you suggest, the audience is compelled to construct in their minds as they seek to understand what they are hearing. The audio dramatist can use voices or sound effects or music, or a combination of any of these elements, to cast a spell over the listener. Writing for audio theatre requires conveying settings and actions with clarity. Since each listener conjures their own separate reality, they can all be different--and some of those "different" realities may bring confusion as your story develops. Where Are We????
So, the first rule is: BE CLEAR. Scenic changes require some signal to the audience so they can keep things straight. If you have too many transitions or they are too tricky to be conveyed clearly, you will lose the audience. And unlike a stage or cinema audience, audio theatre patrons can leave any time they wish-they'll just turn off your show. Some things (too many brief scene changes, quick, one-line flash-backs/flash-forwards, complicated action sequences) are not easily conveyed through sound alone. If you confuse, you lose. Be careful. Now, onto the nuts and bolts. There are a number of ways to suggest time transitions. Use voices. Use music. Use sound effects. Spoken SpellsHave the narrator say, "Ah, but thirty years earlier, Giacomo was still a struggling jester in the court of Ludovico Bersanetti..." Or if you are not fond of much of a narrator's presence, be drier with, "It is 1542, at the court of Ludovico Bersanetti" and put some music, perhaps a horn fanfare, under this to suggest the scene change. Have a character change their focus to, in effect, look off into the distant mists of time and explain, "But it was different when *I* was a boy.. Back then, we didn't have the luxury of reality shows, we lived our OWN realities..." as you begin to fade him down and fade up the scene he is recalling, with walla or ambience or whatever to demark it as NOT where we've been sitting just now. You can even have a reverb effect on this recollection speech get "wetter" (more pronounced) on his final words. "... lived our OWN realities..." My radio adaptation of Charles Dickens' "A Christmas Carol" kept the realities straight by using reverb for the voices of Scrooge and the Ghosts, but kept all the other characters "dry." And when Scrooge is transitioning from the spirit world of the graveyard to his own bedroom, I had him begin his pleading with his voice bathed in reverb, while we gradually "dry up" the reverb until he was fully back in the present with no reverb on his voice. There are all sorts of sonic magic tricks you can use in audio theatre. Cross-FadesYou can use a cross-fading overlap of the two scenes to suggest how memory comes forth to obliterate the present. You can also JUST use the cross-fade between two scenes without any voice leading us there, but this may merely suggest some OTHER scene and not your Proustian time-shifting intention. Or you can cross-fade overlapping lines spoken by the same character at different ages. A grandmotherly voice begins, "I was known as 'Prairie Rose,' a nickname given to me back in 1845 by my beloved pioneer Pappy when I..." Now, have a young girl speak in tandem with the older voice, but have the youngster fading in on the part of the line "... Prairie Rose,' a nick-name given to me back in 1845 by my beloved pioneer Pappy when I..." Have that young voice fade up while the old one fades out. I use this technique for letter reading in my dramas. One character begins reading a letter from someone and we cross fade to the letter writer's own voice--with or without a touch of reverb, as needed for the transition. Their reading in tandem for a few words signals to the listener that this is a transition. And this cross-reading can also shift the scene from the rowdy gold fields of California to a very proper Boston sitting room, depending upon what dialogue comes before or after the letter is read. SIDEBAR:
Meanwhile back at the time transition thread...Gliss to BlissTo signal "here we go with a time shift," you can use a musical figure, such as a harp glissando or sustained arpeggio on an organ or keyboard. This may seem corny, but it works. The audience KNOWS this is a "dissolve into another time." Don't discount the hoary devices of old-time-radio, such as narrators or glisses. Just endeavor to use them wisely. You may even split the musical figure into what my SFX mentor Ray Erlenborn calls a "go-vinta" and a "go-voutta" motif, (A go-INTO for the traveling into the past and a go-OUTTA for the return to the present.) When scoring radio dramas, I'll often use an ascending glissando for the "go-vinta" and a descending gliss for the "go-voutta." Audiences intuitively respond to these devices. It's partly a learned behavior and partly a psychoacoustic trick. Contrasting period music can also accomplish a time transition. You can play say, techno-music to convey "Modern, Hip Now" and a harpsichord or hurdy-gurdy to suggest the distant past--and use these motifs for your go-vintas and go-vouttas. Sound EffectsSimilarly, you can use contrasting sound effects. For example, to depict NOW, you hear a writer typing on his computer keyboard as he intones, "Dear Blog....". To depict the past--like 20 years ago--use a typewriter's clacking keys. To go further back, use pen and paper or chiseling on stone tablets. And to go all the way back to pre-literate times... the sound of Oog scratching his head and muttering, "If only there were writing." The Sound of NothingThere are many ways to convey scene transitions in audio theatre. The BBC's long running and masterful, "The Archers" series uses... silence! NO narrator re-setting the scene. NO curtain music. They use a brief silence between scenes, sometimes fading up some ambience to suggest a setting of a shop or street, but mostly relying on the dialogue and the actors' tone of voice to "paint" the new set with the least obtrusive means. Their lack of a transition device IS their device. Give a listen: http://www.bbc.co.uk/radio4/archers/
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